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for Partners by Moonlight

by ShadowsCall

person thoth_moon
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh... somethin's gonna happen, somethin's gonna happen... It's like all the pressure it building up, and the volcano's gonna have this major catastrophic explosion... SWEETNESS!!! ^__^ I'll be looking forward to it. See ya.
person Esth
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update!
I'm happy now...
That was wonderful...
Please update soon ^o^
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Nice little confession Kurama sort of made. Update soon.
person kye
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! u updated! *dances* Pleeez write more, it's sooo good!
person Akela (and Alucard hiding indescretley in the background)
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a thought hath crossed my mind.....
are you going to include Koranues' amulet/necklace? it wouldnt be right if you left that out!
he treasures that little trinket! perhaps a tale of how he came to posses it is in order?
PLEASE DONT LEAVE OUT THIS CRUICAL PART!!!
*wonders to self why the hell she feels so strongly about the issue*
hmmm...
*Alucard shoves her back into desolate corner*
Alucard: stay. the author has yet to update. remain in that corner or i'll destroy your computer.
*sobs and curls into unreasonably small fetal position*
no..... please update... oh god, not my computer...
*Alucard rolls eyes*
person Kuranga108
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! you updated!! and with a good chapter, too. this one was great (as were all your others, of course). i liked how you had them 'pleasure each other' without actually breaking their word. with those two as horny as they are it's a wonder they lasted this long. great chapter. update soon!
person phoenix
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*starts sighing* oh poor both of them no sex for two months *sniggers* *kurama and kuronue glares at her* * starts laughing* BWAHAHHAAH!!!!! LOL! OMG I"M CRACKING UP FOR NO APPARENT REASON!!!!!!!
person Akela
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sighs and takes a deep breath*
OMG!!! YOU HAVE GOT TALENT!! IVE LOOKED HIGH AND LOW FOR THIS PAIRING, BUT THERES HARDLY A ONE TO COME ACROSS!!!
I GAVE UP AFTER LOOKING THROUGH THE WHOLE ARCHIVE, AND NOW, MONTHS LATER, I RETURN TO FIND THIS SPLENDID PIECE OF
WORK?!?! IMAGINE MY ELATION!!! THIS IS SHURLY A CAUSE FOR CELEBRATION!!
*dances about*
I HIGHLY ANTICIPATE YOUR NEXT UPDATE!!! MY GOD, THE FULFILLMENT!!
*promptly wanders into a dark corner until authors acclaimed update*
and here i shall remain until i get another chapter.....
person hColleen
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yays...poor frustrated demons got some relief...and they can almost sort of admit how they feel about eachother...Very nice chapter...lots of insight to their relationship and some bits of smuttiness...good combination. See you next time.
person thoth_moon
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh sweetness, you updated. ^__^ I like it when you make them act so immature around each other; that's how friends (and/or lovers) should act.

Well, I'm not entirely sure what else to say, other than that this was another great chapter, and I hope the next one comes soon- I want to see what goes down with the two and Kurnoue's dad's people.