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for Partners by Moonlight

by ShadowsCall

person Heaven & Hell
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hell: Jus' to clear somthing up, HELL"S KITTY, is actually me, but since my sweet (>p blech!)alter ego decided to join in i changed my name!
Heaven: so just use HELL"S KITTY"S e-mail adress k?
Hell: any-whos-es, YOU UDATED! YAAAYYY! PARTAYYYY! loved the new chappies but....
HeavenS: But.... u make poor Kuro get huurtt! T-T Whaaaaaa!!!! Kurama hurry! Help poor Kuro!
Hell: And KILL HIS BROTHER! AND FATHER!!!! MWHAHAHAHAHA! MAKE REALLLY BLOODY!!!!!!!!!! XDDDDD soo soo inasane ^^!
Heaven: -_-' eh.. i think we already know that. Any-whos-es! thanks for e-mailn' us! We're hopin to see some more lemons coming soon too!
Hell: Yeah we'd love to read them! *drool*
Heaven: The story's great, absolutly wonderful so far! Keep up the good work! and once agian, e-mail us when u update! thankies! *glomps*
Hell: *glomps toup! up! ^^
person nicki
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey keep it up this just gets better and better i love it
person SpiritFighter
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yaye! another chapter!!! *glomp* O-o a bad turn of events?! No! Kuroune can't die! O.O eep! update soon! I wanna know what happens!!
person WC
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Short update. Poor Kuronue, he needs a hug!
Kurama, go hug Kuro [ and do other things, of course ;) ]
person ZeroCool
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I spent the last four hours reading this (I can't imagine how long it took you to write all these). This story is absolutedly brilliant! Ie yoe your protrayal of Kuronue and Youko Kurama! But I just can't stand Kurama being with other people... he belongs to Kuronue ONLY. It's such a loss that Kur is is not open about his feeling.
I hope this tale will not include the day Kuronue is killed ! It would be toooo sad!
Write more soon!!!
~ZeroCool
person Hiso-chan
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Y-you can't stop there!! More!! I demand it!

Bakura: You sound like you're in a dinner when you say that.

*hits coffee cup onto counter top, glaring at Bakura who is dressed in a waitress uniform* I'm not the one who lost the bet baby, now give me more coffee!

Kurama: I understand that he lost the bet but why do I have to wear the uniform too? *gives Hiso-chan a plate of toast and eggs*

Because of my incriminating photoes of Kuronue.

Kurama: *tail fluffs, growls* Little...

Bakura: *pulls out knife while Hiso-chan drinks coffee and looks up more fanfics*
person ncicki
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey i love the stroy keeep me updated so i can see how this plays out kay thanks
person Spiightighter
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I loverly new chapter! Kurama is getting a little possive there, isn't he? Ooh lala! What will happen next? Update soon!
person Aenima
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, I haven't really been coming on as much so I just now got around to reading it. I just want to let you know that you are doing an excellent job with this, and I really can't wait until there's more.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Just wanted to let you know how much I have enjoyed your story -- it rocks!!! The personalities of Kurama and Kuronue are so deep and lifelike, and the descriptions of their surroundings just seem to jump off the page! I would give youmy e-mail address, but I just got a new computer and thus don't have one yet...that, and if I gave you my mom's and she found out what I was reading, she'd throw a fit!!! ^__^ I look forward to your next update. Keep up the good work!!!