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for Redheads at Play=Breath of the Wind

by Katzz

person Suryallee
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!
You made my day with this one!
Oh I love your fiks! And I really do love this one here, I thought you would never update it anytime soon.
Thank you so much, it really raised my curent mood of feeling overworked and a little depressed.
I will dutifully wait for the next one!
person KuwaLove
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man that was great!!! I understand why it took you soooo long to write this chapter....I don't blame you ^_^, it was great!! You know what I think? I think that Kuwabara must have been the author's favorite character out of the whole show. I have many reason why I suspect that. One is because of his name. Kuwabara's name is not only a pun name that is normally a phrase traditionally uttered by people when they hear something scary, but also, according to Togashi, Kuwabara's name is also a combination of the names of two Japanese pro baseball players; however he never seemed to mention who those two were ^_^;

Another reason is in the third season, the Chapter Black episodes. He had mainly focused on Kuwabara in that season, and had repeated so many times and in many different ways how powerful Kuwabara was getting and how he was going to be the most powerful human in all three worlds. However, because of popular demand by the readers AND especially from Shonen Jump, Togashi had to change this idea and make Yusuke; who was the main character after all, be the one to destroy Sensui.

One last reason...if I continue I will take up the whole review page ^_^; ....is in the last episode. If he trully didn't care for Kuwabara, he could have ended it with Yusuke coming back taking Keiko with him back to the demon world and becomming king....however, Yusuke lost and wasn't king and that last episode was focused on Kuwabara and how he was going to graduate and how he had grown and stuff ^_^.

So what I'm saying is Kuwabara needs for love, and you definitly give him what he deserves, espeically since I believe that Yoshihiro Togashi loved Kazuma Kuwabara and he was his favorite character.

I love this story and I love every single story you write ^_^. Pleasae contiue writting, though I know it's hard with all of that stuff you have to do. I can't wait for another update! Update as soon as you can!!! ^_^
person The Green Knight
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Yes! I love this story! There were a few awkward moments in the lemon, but it was still GOOD! And yes, I can testify for Kuwabara on how the others are made into flawless 2D characters! It's fucking sickening that people can forget about Kuwabara like that and make him worse than he actually is (which he isn't bad at all if one would STFU and really look at him for who he is)! It's mostly the Hiei/Kurama fans and the Mary Sueists that do him in like that! *beats up the aforementioned culprits* Take your time Katzztar (can I call you "Kazzy" or do you only let Altar-chan do that?)!
person Kagi
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARIGATO!! ^___^ *is relieved that someone realizes Jin could never be Irish cuz he lives in the Makai!!*

Interesting ficcy! And yes, Jin-chan is very kawaii! <3 <3
person Suryallee
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KATZZTAR!
Please, could you update this wonderfull fik in sometime?
Really, shame on you, this is so good and came back to look every week since I first read it. Only to find,Nothing!
Please?Please?Please?Please?Please?Please?Please?Please?Please?Please?Please?Please?
I really would love to read a next chapy!
A Hopeful Suryallee (who tries at the moment not to cry)
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello again,
Will you ever update this?
I really like it! And your ideas are great!!
Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please (and so on, so on, so on...)
I really would love to read a new chapter.
person Suryallee
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love both characters very much and this is one of a few M/M stories that caught my interest right from the beginning on.
Could you update this please? I would like to read another chapter really much!
(I hope you can understand what I am try to say! my english is not the best.)
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...... Damn....

I remember reading about MD's challenge... I wasn't up to it myself, but I'm glad you were.

And now I can't wait for the two to meet face to face. And Kuwa should wear his hair down more often. *drools*
person The Empress
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoo hoo! Nice story! I always loved Jin. He is so freakin' cool. ^_^ Hope to read more of this story. ^______^
person The Green Knight
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And if you don't update, Kazuma will never get to see what Jin wants to do to him!