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for Feeding Ground

by vlg

person krad
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHAHAHAHAH,LOVE THE WAY IT ENDED!XD GREAT FIC!!!
person Gin Nova
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* Revenge is sweet indeed! Nicely done, Kurama is rather interesting when he has a hunger for blood. Keep up the good work, yep yep. ^_^
person foxxy-baby
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Cannot believe you would just leave it like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GET your ass back on the computer and finish it.!!!!!!! But in an all over review it was so totally AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person AnnaJaganshi
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! That was freakin' great,VLG! Poor, unsuspecting Hiei, lol. That was awsome, great job!
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I found this on some other website several months ago, and it is still my favorite yaoi. Short but well-written, hot... also with some non-con, bondage, and blood, which I'm always delighted to find ^___^ I can always picture it so well... You rock so much!!!

But... this version has a bunch of... typos or corruptions or something. Like, I'm pretty sure I remember "eager fore yee yet angry for needing it" being "eager for more yet angry for needing it"-- there are other weird words and lost spaces. I think AFF screws things up or something... please fix it!!! It is such a great peice of work I hate to see it all damaged like that!
person forbiden child
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O....M...G!!!! O_O love it! you should do one where Hiei gets revenge, i mean like ties Kurama up and gets him good ^_-
Kurama: O_O evil person
Hiei: not a bad idea...
Kurama: O_O;;;;;
^_^
person Hotaru1421
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!!!
person Nekohime
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very sexy yet cute and funny in the end I loved it you did an awesome job on this *winks*
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
basturad you stole that from a different site. wanna know how i knew that?! i vist that site every month.
person Saka
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Wonderful story. I loved it a lot.