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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope Yusuke isn't the bad guy in this. He's my sex puppy ya know. But even if he is I'lill ill read the fic. Just make sure you give him a great lemon scene, whether it's non-con or con. I don't care. I just love Yusuke having sex. hehehe. Hurry with the next chapter please!!!!!!!!
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I like the whole dunking of the head scene. But why aren't there any shampoo's? I'd die if Ildn\ldn't wash my hair! lol.
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the shout out! I really do like this story and I agree that it's important to develop the characters before you get into the lemons. It makes it more believable and fun. I also love the diaglogue between Kurama and the hanyou. I can't wait to see what the others are doing as well. So far you've kept Kurama in character given the fact it is 1000 years later and the world is different. Keep up the good work.
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really good start. You got my attention. Update soon.