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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was very good there arnt enough fics like these
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it. It was a different couple and an interesting way to write a fic.
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I give you thumbs up on writing this steamy fics about my fav pairing, how you do more of these and keep up the good work okay? Ja!
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh... That was Hot. You wrote it well, building up to the action, creating the mood. ^_^
Instead of just juming to the sex.. that never gets the mood set -_-
Even better you had Kurama act in character! As one entityinstead of two personalities in one body. ^__^
Most of the time, fanfic writers have Kurama Youko as a possessing spirit inside Suicchi, even having them mentally talking to each other inside his head. There's nothing in the show or books to support that. -_- In fact when Kurama is talking to Goki, he sat'st's more of amerger than a possession.
Instead of just juming to the sex.. that never gets the mood set -_-
Even better you had Kurama act in character! As one entityinstead of two personalities in one body. ^__^
Most of the time, fanfic writers have Kurama Youko as a possessing spirit inside Suicchi, even having them mentally talking to each other inside his head. There's nothing in the show or books to support that. -_- In fact when Kurama is talking to Goki, he sat'st's more of amerger than a possession.
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was a good story......the pairing was quite different but, it was pretty good,,,,,
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The went beyond hot. You fucking rock my world. Great job. Do it again, do it again. Any other pairings you like. You write great lemons.
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like. I like it alote. I hope you write anther one soon.