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for My Sex Gang

by shun208

person phoenix
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
before you carry on i think u should reread your whole thing there are loadsof wrong spelling mistake and some sentences i don't even understand like Yusuke, what are you going here? and people won't understand warmth i don't either..........
person Kitsune of the Rose
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You can't stop there! I want to see what happens between Yusuke and Koenma, not to mention how Kurama and Hiei will react.