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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you can't end the My Sex Gang stories they are awesome!
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how about using yusuke as an alternative, telling them (Koenma/Yusuke) that they are having problems with each other, jealousy of course... well, it's just a suggestion.
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December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow,alota sex in this story, lol. continue soon
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
if this had a plot, i sure tha hell missed it
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! I read thsi story on FF.n but they took it off, im so glad i found it again!! this is sooooooo good, i hope Hiei and Kurama make up ^_- hehe please continue soon!!!
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was talking about u silly-pants! I really liked your sex gang story! All the hottest guy from YYH fu*king each other like mad was just what I was looking for. Can't wait to raed more of your work in the furture.
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
puuuurrr
please update soon *droolz*
please update soon *droolz*
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So.. umm... don't you think... that biting someone's dick would hurt?? I mean, sure, sucking.. but biting... jeYourYour story was pretty good. Yeah. Um, let's see. You need a wider variety of words. I mean, you use many words too much.. <_< And I don't think most people yell like they're laughing... like.. "Ahahaha" You know? Try... moaning... like.. "Ahhnn..." And stuff like that. o_o; Have fun writing the next chapter. Try not to use "rocking" a lot. It's a good word, but don't use it too often. Have a bigger vocabulary. =D
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your story may have a good idea but your writing has little talent. the story is all so drab its ahh. said koenma ahh,said yusuke ahh. said hiei. It's not matter of plot its just your talent isn't good enough. Reread your story and fix it up a tad and you could be alot better