rate_review Reviews

hey i like that story... i mean not every romance story has to have a lemon. you've got good dialogue, pretty good spelling and you don't rush the story (which is good because i hate that) and you dont drag it out (which is also good). so keep writing because it gives me something look forward to.

I thought that was a very well thought out and sweet story. Nicely written too. I really enjoyed it, but as you said yourself there was no adult content at all. I think, because of the lack of adult content, this story belongs back on Fanfiction.net. Unless, you want to take this very well written story and idea and continue it with a more adult theme. That would be great. I would certainly look forward to that. You are a very talented writer. Thank you for the story. Hope to see more of your work, with a more adult theme.