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for THE HUNT

by stewie

person hiei_botan
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ omg!!! update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Slash Hudson
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this story is really...weird. A good weird though. I've always been a fan of the Hiei/Botan thing so that's what drew me to this story but now i need to know what's gonna happen next. You gotta write more soon. I can't wait for it but all in all it's really good.
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good job, the sex scene was pretty well written. the only problem was how you ruined the mood with the man in the park. Past that it was great.
person Kuramasbluegurl
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
one w.. G.. GOD
person Agent Di
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... O_O ...Hiei was pretty forceful there. Then again, Botan didn't seem to mind much. :-P I guess being in a rut can have that affect on a demon. Well, update soon (you're really good about updating by the way) I'm interested in how things will go between Hiei and Botan now that 'the hunt' is over. ^_~
person Nina
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really awesome. I loved the end where Hiei was layed back with his tongue handing out. That was too funny. I also think that you kept them in pretty close character. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Kuramasbluegurl
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey you updated thanks
i wondering about this story
thanks for the great read
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very cute so far, Please do contenue.
person Jaganshi Nanashi
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiei's behavior was cute and i love the story but pleaes these cliff hangers are driving me nuts!!!!!!!!!!! please i beg of you please update soon!!!
person Jaganshi Nanashi
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this stroy but please we beg of you please!!!!!!!!! update as soon as you can.