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for Eternal Darkness

by Ravenx

person Nina
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love Beyblade and checked out your story. Very hot. Great job. As for this story, I'm really enjoying it. I'm glad Yusuke and Kuwa aren't mad at Kurama anymore. But I wonder how Kurama will feel about becoming a vampire. Remember, the only reason, according to you, that the sun doesn't kill Hiei is because he's a fire demon. Kurama isn't a fire demon, so how will he be able to go out into the sun. I don't think Kurama would want to live his life as a creature of the night. How would he explain it to his mother? Or how would he be able to continue to go on missions? I'm interested to see how you handle that part of the story. Good luck!!!!!!!
person Dark Age
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
just got to read the last few chapters, really awesome, hope you plan to update soon, and i love the way you write your lemons ::drools:: ^__^
person Katy
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great!! Thanks!
person Anya
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!I LOVE!!! !!! and so on!!!
So, when's next - I'm dieing to read it.
Best Wishes, XD
person Nina
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter. Great fight sequence. I love Jin and Touya making out all the time, it's so much fun. Oh and just a note regarding new YYH episodes. New episodes will be airing in June. They moved the show to Saturdays, again. But instead of starting over like those assholes as Cartoon Network like to do, they are starting with "Grieving Genkai's Death". That episode has already aired so I don't think I'm giving any spoilers away. Starting at that episode should coinside with a new episode in June. I have all the DVD's up to "Dangerous Games". So if you want any spoilers just email me.
person Kori
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jin n' Touya! Touya n' Jin! With a little lemon! More of a citrus maybe. PLease continue!
person Everqueen
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice fight scene, I can never write those. Can't wait to read whatever you come up with next.
person mz.bitz.
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey now that they mention it,i ani and Kurama did go a little fast... BUT THAT DOESNT MATTER, BECAUSE WE ARE IN THE WORLD OF FANFICTION!. lol. anyways great fic so far, please update soon! =]
person Everqueen
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i'm glad I'm reviewing, wouldn't want stuff chewing on my underwear. Why did I have a feeling there would be a lime in this chapter, and not only our two favorite guys, but Jin and Touya too. So very cute. Did you see the way Jin protected Touya against Toguro's soul sucking energy in the fight between Toguro and Yusuke in the finals of the dark tournament. So cute. Thanks for a wonderful chapter. I understand about no one reviewing. I have one call Truths Reed aed and it has 266 hits but only 3 reviews. Gah, stinks. I want more. Post again soon.
person Nina
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. That was so hot. I love Jin and Touya in the mix. Great job.