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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*starts to cry* why did you stop there??? *sobs* its was getting good and u stoped ...
*rubs tears from her eyes* anyway please update as fast as u can type (which i hope is fast...)
- Youko Jaganshi
*rubs tears from her eyes* anyway please update as fast as u can type (which i hope is fast...)
- Youko Jaganshi
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Try 'Ore no chicchai kyuuketsuki'
Ore - Watashi - Boku (All are ways of saying me or I. Ore is a more pompous way of saying it. Watashi is a polite way. Boku is usually said by guys only.) I've heard Hiei say 'Ore' in the movies and shows on japanese language settings. No is possessive maying it My instead of me or I. Chicchai is little. Kyuuketsuki is vampire. Hope that helped, and hope I got it correctly.
Ore - Watashi - Boku (All are ways of saying me or I. Ore is a more pompous way of saying it. Watashi is a polite way. Boku is usually said by guys only.) I've heard Hiei say 'Ore' in the movies and shows on japanese language settings. No is possessive maying it My instead of me or I. Chicchai is little. Kyuuketsuki is vampire. Hope that helped, and hope I got it correctly.
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
They were awfully cute while they were watching movies, I could actually see them, practically. Very cute and very nice. Thumbs up! Hiei as a vampire is perfect too! Looking forward to more! Thanks!
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lemon lemon lemon we want a lemon
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this was just so sweet having Kurama and Hiei watch the movies together and Kurama slowly trying to cuddle up with Hiei. So many fics have them just jump right into the sex, but this approach is better. Don't get me wrong, I am looking forward to the lemon, big time.
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I havne't watched any of those movies you mentioned, although I want to. Wow, Kurama was flirting big time with everyone's favorite Kitsune. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love Hiei as a vampire. . .it fits. . . and i like the way you are writing this. . . very well done. . .
anyway you asked for a Japanese translation and being a second semester student of the Japanese language i feel compelled to offer assitence. . . my little vampire literally translates into:
watashi(boku) no chiisai kyuuketsuki
watashi is more polite. . . Kurama seems like a very polite sort of guy. if he didn't use watashi though he would probably use boku. no implies possession(among quite a few other things. it can get rather confusing sometimes.) chiisai means little or small. you could also use chibi but chibi is rather(make that very) rude. . . and kyuuketsuki means vampire as you said. . . though the word vampire is actually used in Japanese(they write it in katakana and you really can't tell what it isn yon you read it because Japanese doesn't have v. . . it's written more like banpiiya- and yes it's written with the little dash at the end. the dash seems to show up in words with an r at the end or right in front of a consonant or with long vowels, like party, pa-ti-. you can tell when they speak it though. that's how i figured out banpiiya- was vampire)
however i must say that literal translations aren't always the best things to go with(if you asked someone who is truely fluent in Japanese they could probably come up with a better way to say my little vampire than i have). . . in Japanese, pronouns(such as watashi) are dropped as much as possible and there are often diferent words used depending on a person's relationship to another person. for example the word for a person's own father is chichi, and mother is haha. for someone elses father it is otousan, and mother is okaasan(though in anime people seem to refer to their own parents this way as often as not)
on a tangent: kireina kitsune means pretty fox *wink* anata wa kireina kitsune desu.(that means you are a pretty fox.)
anyway i must return to writing the third chapter of my own Hiei centric fic, "Conquest" and bugging my beta over it. . . i wish more people would leave reviews. i would like to know how i'm doing *hint hint*
. . . *sigh* i really need to stop this self promotion thing. . . naughty me. . . well i'll be off
ja mata!
anyway you asked for a Japanese translation and being a second semester student of the Japanese language i feel compelled to offer assitence. . . my little vampire literally translates into:
watashi(boku) no chiisai kyuuketsuki
watashi is more polite. . . Kurama seems like a very polite sort of guy. if he didn't use watashi though he would probably use boku. no implies possession(among quite a few other things. it can get rather confusing sometimes.) chiisai means little or small. you could also use chibi but chibi is rather(make that very) rude. . . and kyuuketsuki means vampire as you said. . . though the word vampire is actually used in Japanese(they write it in katakana and you really can't tell what it isn yon you read it because Japanese doesn't have v. . . it's written more like banpiiya- and yes it's written with the little dash at the end. the dash seems to show up in words with an r at the end or right in front of a consonant or with long vowels, like party, pa-ti-. you can tell when they speak it though. that's how i figured out banpiiya- was vampire)
however i must say that literal translations aren't always the best things to go with(if you asked someone who is truely fluent in Japanese they could probably come up with a better way to say my little vampire than i have). . . in Japanese, pronouns(such as watashi) are dropped as much as possible and there are often diferent words used depending on a person's relationship to another person. for example the word for a person's own father is chichi, and mother is haha. for someone elses father it is otousan, and mother is okaasan(though in anime people seem to refer to their own parents this way as often as not)
on a tangent: kireina kitsune means pretty fox *wink* anata wa kireina kitsune desu.(that means you are a pretty fox.)
anyway i must return to writing the third chapter of my own Hiei centric fic, "Conquest" and bugging my beta over it. . . i wish more people would leave reviews. i would like to know how i'm doing *hint hint*
. . . *sigh* i really need to stop this self promotion thing. . . naughty me. . . well i'll be off
ja mata!
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, Hiei lives the body...BUT WHY DID YOU STOP AT THAT POINT?!
Still everithig's just wonderful - please continue soon.
Best Wishes, XD
Still everithig's just wonderful - please continue soon.
Best Wishes, XD
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great:)Plz update soon,k
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so different. I like it alot. I like that Hiei feeds on murderers and I like that you have brought Jin and Touya into the story as well. They do make a great couple. I wish though someone would write a fic pairing Yusuke and Jin after the DTourTournament. That would be great too. Well, this story has me glued to the screen. Can't wait for the next chapter.