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for Eternal Darkness

by Ravenx

person SkyeKateren
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hola! Member meh? heh Kawaii ^^ I love this story so much! *sniggers* Even more then the one where Hiei gets aquainted with the 'kommputter' Heh..... Don't stop writing! Hiei Kur Kurama are cuuuuuuuuute..... I can't wait to see what Kuwabara does.... If he makes some kind of smart remark or begs for forgiveness for his past ones... Heh... Man this will be fun ^^;;;.........I just have no idea what The others are gonna do though...... I wonder what would happen if he told all of them he was a vampire..........then he told Yukina he is her brother.... Oh thats something to think about....

Ja ne until you write another chappy!........Wait that rymed.... Oo;;;;
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........Don't pay any attention to me.... I Just woke up and I had a few cookies so the sugar AND tiredness are kicking in.....Heaven save us....

Skye
person Mitsko
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Continue please, I like this fic a lot!
person Nina
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice shower lemon, thanks. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job.
person MistressofDragons
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that has got to be one of the sweetest lemons i have ever read. I was going awwww just about every other sentence. . .

some lemons may be hot and some lemons may be sexy but this one takes the cake for being sweet and romantic. . . you were going for sweet and romantic right? *frets*

anyway i've got to get back to typing. . . the fourth chappie of "Conquest" is being dificult. . . sorting out who knows what and how much of the surprise to reveal is dificult. . . i can just see my readers ganging up to lynch me for not updating though. . . maybe waiting till i got 20 reveiws before updating wasn't the best idea. . .

well i seem to be rambling so i'll shut up now. . . ja mata! can't wait for the next chappie. . . i'm wondering w met method you will be using to turn Kurama. . . there are so mdiffdifferent methods(i'm a vampire buff. . . one of my hobbies. . .if you have any vampire questions i'll be glad to answer them to the best of my knowledge. . .)
person Kori
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sweetest lemon I have ever read! I waroe!roe! When does Hiei turn Kurama into a vampire?
person angelkitty77
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was good now we need more
person shanirah
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very sensual. I love it. I just updated on mine, but just wasn't in the mood to write a lemon. Howevefterfter reading yours, I'm kicking myself for not waiting. Ah well, I will just do one later. Nicely done, can't wait to read more.
person Nina
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. So hot and romantic. Beautifully written. The only thing left out was more foreplay, but I don't think our hotties were willing to wait. Can't wait to find out Kurama's take on becoming a vampire. Bravo!!!!!!!! You rock my world.
person angelkitty77
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh man you have to write more soon pleasse i have a feeling the next chapter is the lemon we are waiting for. update soon
person Nina
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You stinker. How could you leave it off there. You better hurry and finish this sexy lemon. I love this story. And I love vampires. Hiei makes the most perfect vampire. Dark and sexy. I'm glad Kurama has taken it so well, but I wonder what he'll think when he finds out Hiei does kill every two weeks and that Hiei wants to make Kurama a vampire too. Should prove interesting. Hurry up you!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!