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by spawn

person k
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
come on pay up. can't just leave people hanging (dumb teases)
person kyli the wolf hanyou
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon
person Birdy06
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Did you know that chpt 3 THE HUNT ENDS AND THE FUN BEGINS is just an A.N.[author's note]?Please update. Arigatou!
JA NE!
person Anon
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please fix the grammar. It's so terrible that I have to read it three times to understand what the hell is going on. And what's with all caps? It's like your yelling at us. Good story though. Just fix the grammar.
person Gitona
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOLLLAAALLLAAA!A HOT SEXY IN HEAT HIEI!!!*drools*Oh pls pls keep this up I love it soo far!!Email me when u update pls??!!!please!!i must knoiw what happens as soon as possible!!
person net
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
god dammit!!! u better fricken write that netx chapter!!! lol that was good!!! i wanna know what happen! but more than that, i wanna know HOW!!!!
person Candace
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is cool. Please continue
person Jupiterlover
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, thanks for making the Kurama/Lita fic! I so will in joy the fic! But could you e-mail me when you post it and when you update on HEAT? I really looking forward on reading the next chapter. Will anyway thanks for making the Kurama/Lita fic, but I want to ask are you going to make Lita a fox-spirit? and please update soon!
person vampyrebitch
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Girl, you might wanna think about finding a beta reader to fix this up. The story is nice and well thought out, but, I'm sorry to say that your grammer leaves much to be desired.