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for Selfish Desire

by choukitsune

person katarica
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
but but but... update more?
person Everqueen
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, this story is awesome. I hope that things can get settled for the couples. I love this story, can't wait to read more.
And I love Hiei/Kurama stories, yeah.
person katarica
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update! Update noooooooow!!! *pokes and prods*
person Katy
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!! It was great!! But..wow!! Kuraam was such a whore!! Sleping with that many people!! lol THough i like this story a lot. Update soon please!!
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*bawls* Kuwa died...*sniff*

Although I do like the addition in the second chapter about "Mary Sue" XD...that brought a bit of levity to it. But this is a really GOOD and really sad fanfic. I can't wait to see where it's headed.

-SPS

(PS Are you kuroikisei on LJ?)
person jadewtch
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fox boy's fault huh? i can't see it happening, (seems really ooc for him to me) but i can't wait to rit. it. i dont see stories from this angle much. I love all your work. I should review more often, but i feel like it's so boring when all i can think of to say is "that's so great, update soon" over and over all the time ::embarassed look::
person silvershuriken
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very, very nice! I feel really bad for Kuwabara though. I really, really respect and love the guy. I always love angst, but I'm always crazy for an angsty story with a happy ending. I can't wait for the KuramaxYusuke thing to come up, although I have an idea what happened between the three bishounens. Very well done! keep up the good work. Also, could you make the next one even more longer, please???? Thank you very much!
person Jena
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooohh the plot thickens! This is a very good fic you're writing, it manages to be different than what is usually out there so I love it!!! Hmm, I am glad Yukina is trying to get the guys to get over their hurt, but will it be enough? And what about Keiko? These and more questions are swirling around in my head as I eagerly await the next chapter, so update soon!! BTW, don't answer those questions, I'm content to wait for answers to come from the story ^_^
person Katy
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! Great job!! I can't wait for chapter three!! I wanna see if i am right!! I know i can't be that far off!! hehehe. Everyone is so in character and so many emotions and i cried a little.
person silvershuriken
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! Lovely chapter. Yeah, I was expecting that it would have to be Kurama's and then Yusuke's fault. Am i right on track? I have a feeling Kurama and Hiei won't be making up and kissing, not after what happened in chapter 2. Cries... Anyway (sniffs), I still love the story, no matter what. Just follow youart art when you write this don't mind us and especially not me. On another note, if I were Hiei, it would be really difficult for me to forgive Kurama, the reason why I always stick with one pair of couple when writing a serious *couple* fic. Sigh. I need to read more of this. Hurry up please, if you don't mind. ^_^;;;