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for The Heavens Mourn

by katarica

person Tom D. Foxx
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very well done...so sad too...just a fwe little touches and I think it'd be really great.
person jadetokier
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Like everyonee sae said that was an amazing story. Usually I read one and say wow that was a good story but this I actually felt for the characters it was really sad and very well-written!
person Cryssy-Chan
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gods...... the others are right. This is one powerful story, by an equally powerful writer (dont take that wrong).
Your an amazing writer, dont let anyone tell you otherwise. You'll prolly be seeing more of my reviews for your stories.
Poor Ki-sama *cuddles Kurama plushie* poor Hiei... its so... sad & dark, but its wonderful that they can be together *sniffles*
Ja Nae
person Bleeder
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...Wow. Just...Wow. You are a fabulous writer. I feel empty inside after reading this, like all of my emotions got wrapped up in the story and now that it's over I can't get them back. It's a fabulous thing, that you've done here. I don't know how many times or in how many ways that I can say I loved this, but believe me, if I could say it in every language in the world I would put it down here now. I really feel like I was blessed to read your work.

...It's so beautiful. And heartbreaking, and wonderful, and I don't know how you do it and I envy you.

One thing I would suggest; use more descriptions. I like to be able to see precisely in my mind's eye exactly what everything looks like. Fabulous. You did wonderfully. I look forward to reading more of your work. Did I say that already?
person Kori
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yet another good story from my favorite writer, katarica! Keep up the goo work!
person Katy
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great!! Just what i needed on a day like today!! Great job kep it up!
person bitBmage (u know me)
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This really makes me mad (not at you). At least Kurama and Hiei are together, but such a paiful price to pay!

My friend is anti-homosexual. I'm still his friend but... I don't want to tell him about me and my orientations because he wants me. Frankly I't 't to loose him to something so stupid...
person Youko Starr
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That one made me cry, it was so sad. Now I need to find a happy fluff story to make me feel less depressed lol.
person mz.bitz.
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o wow... ::speechless:: ................................ wow. i dont know what else to say. even though it was short, it was so.. wow. lols. i dont know how to describe it! looking forward to more of your fics =]