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yah, you do have horrid spelling. now be a good little author and update. oh, and i can halp with spelling if you want, or you could just type it in microsft word first. so bye bye.

Cool threeway. I can just see Kurama throwing a hissy fit and running out of the cave to go and find his own play toy. Very cute. I am familiar with Yomi's character in the anime from spoilers in other fics. I just wasn't sure how he tied in with your. B. But it's fine now. I agree with another reviewer who thought that Kurama and Kuro would make a better pair than Yomi and Kurama. Only cause Kuro's cuter. I'm so shallow. Also, I'm glad you took my comments as helpful and encouraging as they were meant to be. Looking forward to the next chapter. Hboutbout a little lemon for our drool baby KuramChowChow

yay i luv. keep going. i wanna c a whole lem next time =^______~=. next chappy soon plz!
ryoko-chan =-____-=v

This is an interesting story. But try not to jump around too much. You jumped seven years later, then didn't explain how they know Yomi. I'm a little lost. But I really like the idea you have here. Also, you should proof read or have someone else proof read your work. There are several spelling errors that can ruin the flow of the story. All in all I think you may have a wi her here. Looking forward to your next chapter. (I hope you take my comments as helpful and DO NOT TAKE THEM AS A FLAME BY ANY MEANS AT ALL!!!) Good luck!!!!!!!!!