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o0olalas. a knock on the door, if its kuwabara and he's gonna join, i will be very sickened and i'll try to pretend its someone else. LOL. but itf its kuwabara and he's just gonnaget very freaked out, then im all for it. LOLS. WHOEVER IT IS, UPDATE SOON =]

Two words.... Please Finish!! I will die (falls over) not really but I would love more

u really are pure evil, to end it like that!!!!

Man talk about bad timing... Great chapter, Update soon,

OK, the guys have got to send Kuwabara on some scavanger hunt to get hut out of the way. I can't believe you left us off there. Big meany. So far so good with the lemon. Don't forget detail and sound effects from the guys. Also, don't rush through the foreplay. I love that you have Yusuke tied up so he has to watch and get all hot. But please make sure Yusuke gets his turn and then some. I've found that more times than not, in these threesomes, that Yusuke tends to get the short end of the stick. Lets make this about Yusuke. Please hurry with the next chapter. Lovin the story, lovin you.

I want...MORE!!!!!!! Please keep writting, I want to know what happens next, please, please, contune.

o0o0olalas K/Y/H =] yay. the writing aspects of this fic in the first chapter can be improved, to be more emotional or indepth, but other than that i really like it. OMG >.< i hate giving criticism. mostly becuas ei dont take it well. but i love the fic nevertheless. it did get betterin the 2nd chapter. update soon!

hurry nd und update soon!

This is a very good story and nicely written. I can't wait to see how or if you get the three of them together. And what about Kuwabara? Please continue with the story I know that I can't wait to see what happens next.

Fantastic! There is very little H/K/Y threesome fics out there and I am always happy to find a new one. Please don't stop writing it...at least give us a lemony ending!!! Update soon!