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by wilbj

schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story!! Add more soon!! Least i hope!! I am soo glad my friend told me about this well bye!
person lady sesshoumaru
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god. that was soo cute. you did a gthinthing making a threesome out of the three, because it is hard tyo choose which on makes the best couple. Though I did really like it. to me I think this is this is something that I think I can print out and keep.It did make me laugh a lot too!!! And thats rare fdor me, sooo good job
person dragonkitty
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!.......that was great. For a second i though Kuwabara was gonna be in it. hehe. anyway i luv this ficcy.
person EvilS.
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Your lemons are just fine the whey hey are. Please update soon. I love this story, if you don't put up another chappy soon, i'll just die! Keep up the great work!
person edk-adt
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh!that was a fantastic story!PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE SOON BE FORE THE SUSPENCE KILLS ME!YOU ARE ONE OF THE MOST TALENTED AUTHORS IKNOW!KEEP RITING!
person mz.bitz.
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the lemon was fine. it could have been more descriptive, but it was fine for this story. nobody's perfect. =] continue soon great job so far!
person nina
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you did a nice job with the lemon. It did seem a little rushed through, but considering how horny the guys were at that point. It made sense. Maybe the next lemon have them slow down a bit and do some exploring of each other. And I'm glad that you're going to make this about Yusuke. Because when you get right down to it. Kurama and Hiei have the majority of fics and pairings of any other anime characters. Not that I don't love them because I do. It's just nice that finally several Yusuke fics have been popping up recently, which makes me very happy. Good luck with the rest of the story. I'll be watching for updates.
person Kimothy
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow i think your relly good at it and i got hot just reading it..;)
person Anon
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
how can someone write such a good story, but not do well in language arts???
person Anya
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story!! Though, something's missing...guess what!!!- the yellow part!!!! You are evil to end a chappy on that!!!
Update soon!!!
Best Wishes, XD