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for The Pet Fox

by Amisteri

person Shadow Hitokiri
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update damn it! I want to read more!!
person mz.bitz.
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
CLIFFHANGER!!!! please please update soon!
person Kasota
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UGH! TOO SHORT!! I know you warned us...but I still think we're gonna have to break out the nerf....*sigh* UPDATE!
person ko-krama
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there ^_^ . I agree with everybody - more Kurama torture! Torture him until he's so close to breaking that you can smell it...over a span of 43 chapters ^_^ (without truly breaking him, of course). Each one filled with lemony fox torture! Alas, if Kurai doesn't wish to be too cruel he could set up an imagery for Kurama during the time that he is not basking in the fox's presence - let's say something akin to a peaceful forest setting - trees, flowers, a fountain, birds singing (ah...yarisugida - I think I'm over-doing it >_<). Something to keep Kurama's mind temporarily off his gloomy surroundings. Now, for a favorite torture...someone mentioned a mirror! That sounds creative - Kurai would force Kurama to watch Kurai (ugh...hope that wasn't too confusing) have his way with him through the reflection of a large mirror! WAIII! A cock-ring, maybe? Maybe...pleasant tingly feelings you could only get from Kurai mind-manipulating the sensitive nerve-endings of your naked flesh? *Shudders* the possibilities are endless! You know what? I think I'm enjoythisthis review waaay more than I should be. So what do you think? Too...kinky, perhaps? You do what you like of course ^_^ as long as it's along the lines of winning the challenge, ne? I think your doing a fantastic job! I bet you that you're gunna win the challenge. Best of wishes. Bye-bye.
person ko-krama
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now...a torture(s). Someone mentioned a mirror! Brilliant! Kurai would force Kurama to watch Kurai (ugh...I hope that wasn't too confusing) have his way with him through the reflection of a large mirror. WAIII! A cock-ring, perhaps? Maybe...the pleasant/agonizing sensations of Kurai mind-manipulating the sensitive nerve-endings of your naked flesh. The possibilities are endless! You know what, I think I'm enjoying this review way more than I should be ^_^ . Whadd'ya think? Too kinky? Best wishes for you. Toodles.
person anon
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ur taking wayyyyy tooo loong to update!! huurry uuup!!
person Shadow Hitokiri
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn! that was good! MORE FOX TORTURE!!
Yeah, I'm weird.
person k b
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey!!! well, facinating as always........... i really enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!! really great job!!!!!!!!! but promise me that you'll make a very anguish part of kurama in the next chappi, okey???????? pls??????????????? anyways, about the mistake names? don't worry! everyone makes mistakes, and i will still be one of your................................*cries* grst..st................ fan *hugs tightly* wah!!!!!!!!!!!!! a just take care okey?? and dont forget us!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for the next chappi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person halowing4
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I loved the way you had Kurai use Kurama's memories to aid in his seduction. Excellant lemon scene. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person ash
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*grabs the nerf gun and shoots Kurai, shoots some of her teacher and a couple of innocent bystanders* Now are you going to update soon, my pretty hehehehe. *Holds up the gun* Or else I'll shoot. *Fires a warning shot and hits Koenma in the eye* Heh never liked that toddler. *looks at the gun* This is fun. *shoots Hiei, Keiko, Yukina, Kuawbara, Yusuke, Puu and Yukina* Darn its empty...well you better update before I reload. *goes off in search of more nerf darts*