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>> I'm voting for Kurama/Keiko. ^^ And now for my review...I like it. The exposition (begining) of the story is very good. I can't wait for you to update soon!!!

Good prologue! Hmm, you are set up nicely for a Kurama/Keiko pairing (and I do like this pairing), however, there are not many fics with the Hiei/Keiko pairing, and I have to admit, I love the possibilities with that pairing. Keiko is soft, gentle, emotional, but has great strength of character, and is quite capable of giving as good as she gets. If you pair her with someone cool, not visibly emotional, and very self contained (not to mention stubborn, which she is also capable of being), you get a very interesting mix which really give you the oppurtunity to plumb the depths of those two characters. I guess (although Kurama would be mor more gentle one) I would really like to see a Hiei/Keiko fic (Kurama can still be the understanding friend).

This is good so far I can't wait to find out what happens next. Poor Kayko. Please hurry.

ok, i think it should be hiei/keiko. and its only partly because hiei is my favorite characture. the other part is because it would make sence. see everyone knows hiei has a bad past, and because of this incident, he and keiko have something they can relate to. yes i know nothing exactly like that happend to hiei, but i mean a bad experience. just my opinion. an for for the story so far.. i like it and i can't wait for you to update.

Wow. Poor Keiko. What a horrible thing to have happened to her. I think given the severity of what happened, she needs our soft-spoken, caring fox. I vote for Keiko and Kurama. I just don't think Hiei would be able to comfort her like Kurama can without making Hiei completely out of character. And I love Hiei's character.

another great start to another great fic! i think you should totally make it a kurama/keiko fic. it would play so well of this start, it really would. i love reading your stories and i'm really hooked. hope you update soon, on all of them! :)