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for Touched

by Sattapa

person Truth44 (not logged in)
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very, very, interesting. I got scared when I first read it, but came back and finished it. It was cool. Not the best written but what the hell, good all the same.
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Short, but angsty and well written.
person Sailor Tiamat
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting. I hope you continue this story.
person Melody
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Vedy eentaresting. Hehe I liked it, sis. It was kinda creepy w/ the non-con stuff... KeikKeiko shouldne ine in there and shown Koenma what it's like to be someone's bitch (although, she'd sorta have to suffer an eternity of hell for that, ya know - don't bite the hand that keeps your world from bursting into horrible, agonizing, chaos) But that was well written and very... creative ^_^;; Heh keep writing chick - "It's gettin better all the time... Better-better- beeeeetttteeeerrrr"
person yey
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wooooooooooow ho ho ho! that was interesting. please continue, koenma is evnd ind it's weird but I LIKE IT! Please continue!
person StaplersBreak
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
@_@ Wow...I loved that. And that song is one of my absolute favs too! I'm really impressed! Do you think you could do a follow up? Maybe with a different song, ne? If you want I have a few suggestions.