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for The Consequences of Power

by katarica

person Kori
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this story! Kurama is a bad ass in this one! Newer picked him like that! I really like your stories and hope you continue them. And what is it with Hiei and attracting the guys?
person SparkyBlue
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm... hot, tasty fanfideeddeed. Nicely descriptive of action, plot, characters' thoughts, and the environment in general. Thanks for sharing it with us! ^^
person Katy
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now that was Worth the wait!! Man that was good! !Um..no great!! Excellent even!! I hope the next chapter will be up sometime this week!! Thanks for such a wonderful story to read!
person Ravea
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ACK I've been waiting and waiting and waiting and if you don't UPDATE soon I'm going to knock you in the head with my frying pan! Since you've already made me spill the butter... PLEASE HURRY!! *takes out a present* I also have this little gift for you if you Update soon! But you don't get it if I don't see another chapter up ASAP!! *Smiles sweetly with the frying pan raised to attack*
person Andy
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great!! Wil we see more of the Younger Shuichi? i hope so he was so cute!!! I just love this story and i think what you are tryingto show is how differnt humans good and bad are shown to Hiei in his Two months as a girl right? Well...i could be wrong*blushes*Its great can't wait for more!
person Katy
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the great chapter!! I just love this story!
person Ravea
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry I snapped at you... *throws the frying pan away and hands her the present.* It's a Hiei Plushie... my favorite one cause it's got he Jagan open on its head. Oh and the chapter was great... but a surprise the family coming to make Kurama's life even harder... oh and I changed my mind about not liking him being out of character... he's much better like this. Oh and His jis just to cute!! *Sits on the ground and crosses her arms over her chest waiting for the next chapter.*
person Mistress of the Sword
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whee! You updated! I've been checking on it. The mom and brother showing up thing... that was randomg. I really liked it ^^. Please update immediately soonest if not sooner. I just... I really need to see where you are going with this fic.
~Mistress
person Katy
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is this the end? Or did you get bite by the mean Writers block bug? I am hopeing you add more soon!!its a geat origanal story!! I just loved it! Oh and gomen on speling errors i can't seem to spell today!!Ja!
person Kori
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was an adrenaline rush! Please keep writing!!