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for The Consequences of Power

by katarica

person net
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DUDE WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE OR NOT??? AT LEAST TELL US IF UR WORKING ON IT OR SOMETHING??? DID U GIVE UP ON THE STORY OR ARE U GONNA UPDATE????
person phoenix
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cool i'll be waiting for da next chapter if not i'll get a pile of oranges and turn them into orange monsters ^ - ^

Kurama: she kinda hyper today drank too much coffee
phoenix: i dun drink coffee..... you gave mesome sort of candy that made me feel dizzy.......
person Yami Yue
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I can say after reading the last chapter is Woah! I can't wait to read more. Please updade soon.
person Kaioto
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O GEH!!! No stoppy, no stoppy! Write, I say, write! *Didn't realize this was an unfinished fic* T__T Gack.
person Ashira
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not only one of the longest but MY persoanl favorite... I love this story so much!! I check everyday for updates and when I saw this one I smiled.. I don't usually do that.. XD anyway I hope you update soon.... *hint*
person Anrui
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Torture that SOB! I guess it's my evil nature but I love reading about the dudes I don't like getting mercilusly tortured.
Hey, I said I'd write you an awsome review for the end of this fic and I'm gonna do it. I think I'll start after this so I can truly capture you creative genius. ( Man, I'm such a kiss a**)

Well, can't wait for more >:`)
person Anrui
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man, I hate reading really good fanfics before they're fully posted! I get too damb impatiant. You said you were a review whore so I'll make you a deal. Once you finish this story I will write you the most aw inspiring review ever written. I'll make you sound like a fanfiction god or uh... goddess. Ok?! This thing's good and I want to hurry up and finish reading it. It's like an itch that bugs the hell out of you untill you finally scratch it and once you do it feels heavenly.
person Everqueen
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, you do know this right? I want to save it to my harddrive when you are finished, so I can read it when my internet is down (like it was all friggin' day). Is this ok? I won't use any of your work as my own, I save other peoples stories in different folders then my own, so I don't mix any up. I just love it that much. Can't wait to read the rest of it. And WOOT, Hiei called Kurama his mate.
person Kori
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hell yea! Hiei kicked ass! Or should I say skinned ass! ^_^ Loved it! Me want more!
person Youko Starr
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is...



GO HIEI! *holds up a scorecard* 10!

GO EVIL! *Holds up a second scorecard* 10!