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for The Consequences of Power

by katarica

person Katy
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is awesome and i hope it ends o a happy note..maybe a bit bittersweet? Well its up to you the great authoress...lol.
person Kitsune of the Rose
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20 was sad, but it seemed really out of place with everything that happened in the ending of chapter 19.
person alaina
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey i kno college is stressful but update really soon kay?
person Levii
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so worth the wait! Take your time, sweetie, I myself am a writer because I love it, not because I want to please the masses. Don't let the ignorant bother you, and if I ever sent you something akin to that, I apologise. Good luck on school and remember to pace yourself, we don't want you having a nervous breakdown or collapsing in estiostion... that would be bad. I loved this chapter. Here, take these cookies, they are delicious and magical!

Levii ^_^
person Everqueen
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you updated, it was excellent as always. Very emotional. I wonder if the mention of the lost baby will be brought up. Anyways, update as you have time. I get that from my reviewers. LIke I don't have enough on my plate with a family to care for and a job, studies, my husband in Iraq and all the therapies and services I have to keep track of that my kieed.eed. I totally understand. I love this story.
person Kori
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You're back! Real emotional chappy here! Keep itup! *cheers* Hiei told Kurama he loved him! Met mot more love! Come on, update soon!
person Alvida
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have really been enjoying, if that is the right word when some of the events are so horrid, this fic and I was glad to see you getting back to it. I don't know how light an ending you can have what with the rapes and lost child but I'm hoping it will be somewhat upbeat.

One of the things I liked was that the rape scenes were not at all erotic.
person Kitsune of the Rose
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved chapter 19! It was so sad at first, but it had a nice ending. I can't wait for the next chapters! Keep up the good work.
person Aenima
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You shouldn't start something if you are not planning on updating it again, you are leaving rea readers and REVIEWERS wondering wtf happened to you. Why havn't you updated, and why have you left us hanging??
person Mira
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have an idea if you're out of any. You could have Kurama have amnesia. You don't have to use it, I just thought it would be a good idea. Great story and hope you update soon!