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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Please continue! I'm hooked you are a bloody brilliant writer!
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damnit..too lazy to log in..too early in the damn morning....put the next freakin chapter up soon, woman.
There. Thats as close as a devoted admission of my love for you as you'll get.
There. Thats as close as a devoted admission of my love for you as you'll get.
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You and your damn cliffangers! Get rid of them! Ya hear?! Get rid of them! Great chapter! Can't wait for the next. Please make it soon!
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey is the story done or is there more? cause even tho it's weird i like it so if it's done make a sequel and so it soon pleease and if it isn't yet (i hope) then update really soon kay? thnx
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter, but why did you skip chapter 21?
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww i thought u updated but i say hapry ending even tho i don't like yaoi but oh well stil lobe your fic so update soon kay? pweasse?
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*pouts* now that was just mean! Anyways! I'm so a haa happy ending... but a sad ending would probably be more realistic. Ai-ya! what to do! I love your story, by the way. The way you write is... abosolutely wonderous. Your ideas are so... original! Ah, well... lets go for the happy ending. I could never be mean to Hiei and Kurama... well, at least not too mean. *evil giggle* Anyways... update as soon as you can! I eagerly await your final chapter!
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
pls update soon. maybe tomolo???? and pls a happy ending is what i wan. but actually u could do 2 ending. a sad one and a happy one, so that readers could choose or read both. is there sequel?? this is a great story, sequel is what it needs
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Updates!! I like this story and I was sorry to hear that some had ... gotten overly vocal? about the updates.
You have a fairly intricate story going on here. Fast updates (unless you have the bloody thing all written out BEFORE
you start posting chapters) makes for a very common and dull story -- which this one isn't.
Um, as far as the ending goes ... hasn't there really been enough angst-type material so far?? Besides, I think they e a e a cute couple ^_^ Not to mention that it's gonna take the kitsune some fast talking to get back in Hiei's good
graces again after his major screw-up.
Although ... after that display of "force" by Yukina ... hehe, would be kinda amusing to see Hiei take lessons from
her on when to and not to "go off" as it were. Eh, some drama leading up to a happy? I've noticed that the stories I
keep coming back to read on a regular basis have a happy ending unless I'm specifically in the mood for angst. Some
of us have enough "drama" in our real world that we want things to work out in our fantasy world. I know, hell of an
explanation, but I'm here at the computer at 5AM because leg cramps won't let me sleep!! -_-
You have a fairly intricate story going on here. Fast updates (unless you have the bloody thing all written out BEFORE
you start posting chapters) makes for a very common and dull story -- which this one isn't.
Um, as far as the ending goes ... hasn't there really been enough angst-type material so far?? Besides, I think they e a e a cute couple ^_^ Not to mention that it's gonna take the kitsune some fast talking to get back in Hiei's good
graces again after his major screw-up.
Although ... after that display of "force" by Yukina ... hehe, would be kinda amusing to see Hiei take lessons from
her on when to and not to "go off" as it were. Eh, some drama leading up to a happy? I've noticed that the stories I
keep coming back to read on a regular basis have a happy ending unless I'm specifically in the mood for angst. Some
of us have enough "drama" in our real world that we want things to work out in our fantasy world. I know, hell of an
explanation, but I'm here at the computer at 5AM because leg cramps won't let me sleep!! -_-
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a great chapter (the one before this one rofl.) Hmmm, I would say happy ending, they have been through so much and Kurama ly dly does love Hiei. I hope that they do get together and things are corrected. Wow, didn't think I would ever read one like that where Shiori threw a fit at Kurama. Nice touch, and his drinking.