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that was so awsome. god that would hurt so much.i hope you'll continue cause im eager to see what happens ^_^. e-mail me

Bonjour! I've just read the whole entirety of your fic today (i have no life) and I just wanted to compliment your impressive writing skills. I'm hoping for the next chapter soon. Until then, ~Au Revoir~

Despite the rampant racism and OOCness of Shiori, the ubiquitous drugs and alcohol, and the constant, graphic sexual violence, I keep coming back to this story. Every time the gross factor shoots up too high, I quit and do something else for a few days until the curiousity begins to threaten my health and I have to come back for 3 or 4 chapters. Actually, my favorite parts were with Kurama's psycho grienriend, I was hoping you'd bring her back as a stalker or something. I don't think 'Kirei' is too close to 'Hiei' and 'Kurama', I'll admit I wondered at first, but the first 'i' killed that theory. Actually, I've been wondering if you're going to say her soul is that of Hiei's aborted baby? The appearance and power seem to bear this out, and Kurama did something similar...

I wish you would do a sequal to this. This whole story rocks! You rock! Thank you so much for such a great fic

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....
that was awesome!
so cute, and sweet, etc!!

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bwah!!! That was short!!! Make more!!! You better write that epilogue soon girly... this chapter took forever... anyway good job, I smile at the words written on this page. heheh, so yeah write more and make me happy! ^___^

Good chapter as always, can't wait for the last chapter. Very sweet.

You know, it's strange. I was just thinking, 'hm, I'd love to read this story' and what do you know? Chapters! *huggles* YAY! A happy ending. It's sad that Hiei lost the baby.... Wonder how that'll go.... *looks at her*

I loved Evil.... He reminds me of me and boynd'nd's guy friend. He does the whole weaponry, drinking, porn, drugs thing. :P It's cool. Nice person to hang with. oooooooooo--can't wait for the last chapter. And I wish to extend my apologies that I was a lazy bitch who didn't review every chapter.... Bad, bad Kahlan!

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But I'll definitely review the last!!!!

that was great!
i cant wait for the last chapter(s)!
im very glad you decided to make a better ending than you did have...it was..rather..anti-climatic.

well, keep writing!
this story rocks!

WOW, what a great two chapters. Glad they made up, but gah, did Hiei have to let loose the dragon?