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for The Consequences of Power

by katarica

person jadewtch
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww poor Hiei =\ Update soon! I cant wait to see what happens next!
person Katy
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!! Man Kurama let trish have it yes!!Poor
hiei. Keep it up this is great.
person Ravea
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story so far. It's kinda cute too. Cept I don't like how Kurama's so mean to Hiei... that's not right. He seems a bit out of character to me... but maybe it's just me. Please keep going and update soon. OR ELSE I'LL BOIL YOU IN MY TUB OF BUTTER!
person bitBm
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That witch! (please replace the 'w' with a 'b' ok?) How dare she do something like that! I'll bite her head off!
person Katy
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this so far!! Please update soon!
person Andy
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting how Heii is a girl and it seems that Kurama is a very very horney man!!lol. I hope that we see more actioon!!on!! its real good so far!!
person Anon
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think the characters were severely OOC. Kurama is smart enough to see someone who's been beat up, and would have saw the bruises on Hiei's face. He cares a little more about his friends than that.

And Hiei isn't an illiterate idiot either. Being a demon from another world doesn't make a person stupid, he had to survive somehow in the human world for all of that time he was unable to go back and forth to Makai.
person bitBm
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiei you hentai! Watching stuff like that honestly!

Hey author person, yeah you... Good job! I loved t new new chapters!
person Katy
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kurama is a total asshole in this!! With friends like that who needs enmies!He failed to help twice!! Poor Hiei. Man though don't get me wrong this fic is great!! i hope you keep it up!! Man will Hiei even surive his sentence?
person Katy
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!! Add more soon please!