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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW, that is so good so far. I hope that you continue this. Also, will Evil figure out that Kurama is not who he says he is? I mean, he did see Youko there for a bit. :)
Can't wait to read more.
Can't wait to read more.
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE TELL ME THAT'S NOT THE END OF THE STORY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? This is one awesome. I love it. I started reading today in school and only got up to chapter 3 and then ran home to finish the rest. Damn that Kurama. If he wasn\eingeing so damn stubborn, then none of this would have happened to lovely little Hiei. Anywho's, did I tell you this was an awesome story? Keep up the awesome work or I'll threaten you with the Internet monkeys. They are scary only because they work for Bill Gates. Merry Christmas!!! And don't forget to eat your Green Eggs and Ham!
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god. the rape chapter was so sad. >.< wow. im so glad that the plot is starting now!! lols. not that it wasnt good before >.~ lol. i really love your style and way of writing. and gret proofreading. =]
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. I loved this chapter. Kurama's back to being his sweety self and Hiei is close to being back to ass kicking. How much time has passed since hiei has become human? Oh well, it doesn't matter as long as we get some H/K action soon right? Keep going, and update soon please? *puppy dog eyes*
~Mistress
~Mistress
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! You just made my night after such a bad day today!! :( But now i feel like :) from reading this!! Evs ths the coolest!! But hey you knew that right? Hurry with some more!!
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HI!!!!!!!!!!!....ok the story is so cool hiei and kurama are my favorite cupple, they just look so cute to geather...anyway i just have 1 thing to say.............FINISHIT THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....i'm very into it and i want to see whats going to happen ok thank you bye
~max
~max
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say I am disappointed in this chapter a bit. But it was cute and all with Kurama careing for Hiei... And what's with Evil anywyas... neato character but I don't get his point in the story much... just so Kurama has another friend? Hopefully you do LOTS better on the next chapter. *Pulls out a frying pan* Oh and I found something better then a tub of butter to threaten you with. *Raises frying pan* UPDATE SOON!!
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah you updated!!I am so happy!! I hope you add more soon!!
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When Hiei gets his body back make him use the Dragon of Darkness Flame on that stupid pricks ASS!! Send him to the deepest darkest pleverever. Hell is to good for a man like that! *Kicks over her tub of butter* Now look what he made me do. Now I have to find something else to threaten all the writers who don't update. *She mummbled something and stomped off to try to find something. but turning back she shouted.* YOU BEST UPDATE SOON!!!
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that chapter (10) was fantastic!