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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're doing a wonderful job on this story, please continue! If at all possible I'd like an email when you get your next chapter up! Please keep up the great work!
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story has an unfinished feel to me. Love it to death, but I can't help but feel there was something missing. Maybe a sequal with a lemon in it? Mybe not I'm not sure.
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet! I loved it! You girls rock! Great story! I'll probably read it over and over, it was that good!
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November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
story sounds pretty good so far....keep up the good work, Id like to see where you take this. update soon
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely little story! ^_^ It was pretty darn good. I wonder what else you two have written, must check it out. Until next time! ^_^
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Who would have thought? Keiko and Hiei... Interesting couple and fic.
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey this was absolutly FIGGIN' FANTASTIC! You have got to do sequel!
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Loved it! I love Hiei/Keiko fics, not enough of them around!
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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you know when you say "its the least expected" it makes is obvious its Hiei. If someone says in a Yu Yu fic "its the one you least expect" Yuskue would be more of a surprise.
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was amazing. I love Hiei/Keiko stories though this has to be my second favorite. I could deffinately read anoter chater. I would indeed love another chapter. is was brilliant though i do feel sorry for her parents. Question, did they really die? thats the only part i was confused about. Aw well, i hope you come up with anoter chapter.