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by Yuki

person comicfancat
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow,this is some story and yes I'd like to see what happens.I hope you update soon,I'd like to see Hiei kick some major ass and do some major damage to that kid for hurting his fox...
person Yuki
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey guys, I'm SO sorry for not having the next chapter up yet...but Ive been having a few problems lately and it's been hard to do a lot of things so be patient PLEASE! Im really sorry T_T dont hurt me!
~Yuki~
person Nina
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How about the next chapter already. I can't stand the suspense any longer. I want to see Hiei kick some major ass.
person Kori
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
me like so far. MAKE HIEI KILL THAT BASTARD!!!
person Nina
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story. Please update. I want Hiei to beat the crap out of this guy. One big complaint I have. Well, it's more like whining.
You didn't write out the entire rape scene, only the beginning when he over-powered Kurama. And you have to explain why Kurama was such a wuss and couldn't fight back against a human. Can't wait for the next chapter. Your a very good writer. Keep it up.
person foxhiei
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
finish this please. it is very good so far and disturbing at the same time.
person Yuki
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hhhhheeeyyyyyy! Thanks everyone for the great reviews!I love you all sooo much! I appreciate the fact that you all like my story. I think Im just happy that you actually gave me time to read my story. lmao Im so pathetic lol last story was just...sex O.o this one has more thought to it hehe and just to let you know I get more writing...ability (if that what you wanna call it) When ppl review...dont ask I just have to have a reason to wtire lol I guess...as I've said so many times before Im a moron so you guys can review like a million times if you wish I really dunt mind at all and tell your friends about my story if you can cause more reviews is gooooooood lol Well thanks again for reviewing ^^ and sorry if I made some spelling errors o.o;;
~Yuki~
person Mija
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey i dont think it stinks..I like it alot..feel heart broken for my poor Kurama but I just know my Hiei will kick azz for his fox..he will wont he?? he must please please update please?? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person Taryn
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your story is really good so far, please continue it
person Katy
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was good!! Pe upe update it soon!!