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by Yuki

person Shun208
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude..... like bitblackmage said, where'e ste story? Is just me or the storys so done gone? Where's the story? dude!
person JAn
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Arrr....is my eyes having problems or isi t the com is having some stupid virus..i juz dunoe y i can't read the story. maybe u had not put any story in yet but pls do soon as i like to know about the story.
person Devil\'s Wings
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! This is like one of the BEST one i red all week. I feel so sad for Kurama-chan, I hope that Bard guy die in a slow and painful death by Hiei-chan!! Plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Yuki
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehehe! someone got tommiommisoner gordon joke! I love my stupid jokes at least they made one reviewer laugh. ^^ Ok I finally got around to getting serious about the next chater so it SHOULD be up really really soon! Thank you all for reviewing and trust me they are like train tickets to inspiration station so thanks you again
~Yuki~
I ¢¾ u all!
person Boom Chick
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! I can't belive you left it at that cliffhanger! I Really can't wait to see what happens next! Will Batman save the boy wonder!? Please continue soon!
person Pauline Martinez
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
th story was good but i need to know what haapen. so please get the next story upASE!ASE!!! i jsut readed both right now so i really need to know what happen.(You konw i was typing so fast i had go back and fix) Oh the story was good. i mean that asshole really needs to die and Hedi was just funking pissed i would too if someone did that to my lover. so good job. Just get that next story up!!!now!!! Umm sorry about that. please forgive me i just want to know what happens. So goodbye^_^.
person Kori
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool lemon! Wait, lemons aren't cool they're hot. So, HOT LEMON!! Kurama did a vanishing act? Strange where did he go?
person katy
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up. i want to know what is going on with kurama!!
person mz.bitz.
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG why is kurama dissappearing?!?! you better update faster this time you, you.. you great author you!!! LOLS. update soon =]
person Nina
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wild story. Poor Kurama. I love a pissed-off Hiei. More please very soon.