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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well written story. There is a lot of thought put into it. I hope you are happy I'm hooked, and can wait to read more.
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this fic is great. I am glad Hiei does not swing both ways that would be sick. Update soon pleaz
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this new chapter, ch5! Hehe Hiei's responces were amusing. Thank you for having Hiei straight, I'm not against gays, it's just tthe the chatacters of Hiei and Kurama are NOT gay in the show or books, they are merely good friends.
When Karasu made aces ces on Kurama during the Dark Tounament, Kurama said that he did not go that way.
When Karasu made aces ces on Kurama during the Dark Tounament, Kurama said that he did not go that way.
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A Inu Inu-Yasha... he seemed pretty in character to me. If Kagome suddenly dissappeared, he would trace any and every scent, or any type of trail he could find in attempt to find her........
After all in the show, Inuyasha followed Miroku's advise to get captured by the harpies in an attempt to find Kagome......... they wrongly thought that the harpies were allies to Kouga who had kidnapped her.
After all in the show, Inuyasha followed Miroku's advise to get captured by the harpies in an attempt to find Kagome......... they wrongly thought that the harpies were allies to Kouga who had kidnapped her.
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay!!!
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, even though your grammar is a little bad, the story is still interesting. But please don't take an entire paragraph to say one thing. We all know that Inuyasha and Kagome love each other in a completely pure and platonic way. So don't beat around the bush with that. Write in detail, but not so much that it would be overkill.
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this so far. It could move a little quicker, but I like where you're going with this. I would love to see Hiei rescue Kagome, just in time, and have her seduce him and/or attack him since she's all sexed-up and ready to go. Can't wait to see what happens next. Good job.
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the story! I hope you update soon! I wonder how Inuyasha and Hiei would get along?
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is already starting out a winner. Great crossover pairing and story line. Can't wait to see what happens next. Next chapter soon please.
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ya' think Hiei would be faster. Well, update!