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for New Mission

by Mija

person Shiro Ryu
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wah!!!!!!! Please don't let them reject each other in the cold light of the morning!!!!!! They were finally getting together (whine, whine)!
I know, I know, the author is always right,(sigh) frustrating, but right. You gotta do what you gotta do in order to make the story right (sigh). But please, soon?!
Thanks
^_^
person t
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you didn't have them "go at it like rabbits" yet. Thank you for the tease and thank you for waiting until Hiei is in his cute demon form.
person Katzztar
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Actaully, I like the way you are taking the story. This is an improvement over the fics that start the action right at the get-go.(Kattz ducks as she realizes that includes her own stories)
It really builds the tension.
Hehe I am waiting for the lemon though!
person tryxi
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi i just got finish reading the update to your storie. its really good so far. and i understand what u ment at the end notes. i cant wait for u to update it again really soon. so pls do so. and if u wouldnt mind pls email me when u do. thanxs keep up the great work! :o)
person Katzztar
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well the sexual tension has been building for some time now, not only for Hiei ans Kagome... but for us as well!

We all need a good rut ;) LOL
As long as Hiei doesn't force her.... but instead is very persistant in gettint her to relax & 'in the mood'
person Cashmere
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I really love this story. When are you going to update it?
person angelkitty77
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more soon please you can buy a special whistle that calls your muse back to you
person Nina
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved the new chapter. Can't wait to see what happens from underneath them. Maybe some naughtiness. I hope.
person EvilCheese
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe. Too little. Next time, let it be Hiei and not the forest, but I do have a question: did the water do ant tha that might have taken her virginity?
person Megan Consoer
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters.