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December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story.Cant wait till the next chapter is put up.
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December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Doing a Really good job on this story and keep counting with this story. ^_^
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December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay, you updated
good i thought you were done
thanks for the update
good i thought you were done
thanks for the update
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so far great.I cant wait for the next chapter!! ^-^
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story !1 It´s realy good!!!!
Please update !!!!!!!!
Please update !!!!!!!!
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
VERY well done. That is SO cute when Hiei battles himself 'cause he won't admit he loves Kagome. AWW, how sweet...Newayz, PLEASE update soon, and I really hope you find your muse again, 'cause even tho this story is great so far I bet you think it could be even better!!! And you WILL put a complete lemon in before the story ends, ne? Thankies, and LOL
-Dark Raven
-Dark Raven
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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh yes, very nice chapter
cant wait till the next
update
thanks for the great update
cant wait till the next
update
thanks for the great update
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September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have loved the idea of an InuYasha and Yu Yu Hakushou crossover for ages, and it's nice to see your take on it. Kagome andi mai make quite a nice pair. However, you are in dire need of a beta reader. You have many awkward or incomplete sentences, and it seems as if you have not even run your chapters through a good spell-checker; sometimes even character's names are misspelled! A good and thorough editing would greatly improve your writing in general and this piece in particular.
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O interesting and u have such a good mind