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Excellent fic! My compliments to the writers. I must admit I DO like the idea of Hiei and Shizuru together. They play off each other quite well. And Keiko . . . two men for the price of one :D Who could ask for anything more? ^__-

I do hope you guys continue this story, and I look forward to future updates--theMaven :)

Yeh! I am so glad you updated this fic! It is one of my favorites. I was also dieing to read more about Hiei's reaction to marking Shizuru as his mate. One thing though, I'm not sure, but I think you might have skipped a paragraph between the fourth and third paragraphs from the end of the chapter. There is some disjointedness between the two paragraphs, and the mention of a plant at the very end seems to be missing it's explanation. I may be wrong, or I might be projecting my own error tendencies on to you (when I do write, I have been known to skip whole thoughts because my brain is so far ahead of my fingers. LOL). Anyway, other than that small bit, your chapter was fantastic as usual! I love your writing and I can't wait for your next update (no matter which fic it is ^_^)!

i love your fics. especially this one, but it's been so long since you updated it and its not the nices place to leave off, i mean it could be worse, but that's not the point. the point is that you need to update it soon, please! eagerly awaiting the next chapter. oh, by the way, in the crushed petals story, you should put keiko with kurama. hehe

Sighs loudly...ohhh that was 5 great chpaters. Please continue soon

Hey, Shizuru is one of my favorite characters. I hope we will be getting some hot Hiei/Shizuru action!

Thanks for the story.

Very hot chapter. I was hoping you would have Kurama make love to Keiko, not just Yoko. I love Yoko, but it seems in alot of fics that are M/F Yoko always comes out Kur Kurama gets left out. Glad to see they will both get a turn. Also, I have to say I love how you got Hiei and Shizuru (sp) doing the nasty in the hot spring. That was perfect and much, much better than in some bed. I really love the flow of this story. You got me glued to the screen waiting for the next chapter.

*does happy dance* ^________^ Thanks for updating! I loved the lemons. Yeah, I admit it. I'm a hentai. ^^ Keep up the great work!!

It just keeps getting better every chapter. I'm impressed by your writing skills! I must admit I was a little confused at first by your mind speech between Kurama and Youko, because I wasn't sure if you were playing on the two souls in one body thing, or if he justjust slightly schizo, but your last chapter cleared it up a bit. Great story, and this makes two authors who have made a realistic appearing relationshetweetween Shizuru and Hiei. Love it.

I still love this fic, no matter the smut content. Besides, who can pass up on Kurama/Keiko smut??? mmmm kurama...(drool). What can I say? I have a thing for red head anime characters.

This is getting even better than before. I hope you contenue this, I was checking back every night to see if the new chapter had been posted. This is lovly, please contenue the great work.