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for Bonds of Consent

by vampmistress76

person A.J.
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fanfic is very cool. I have always loved the Keiko/Youko pairing and you use it so effectively in this story that it's hard to drag your eyes away from it. That panther demon though really gives me the creeps and I can't wait to see how bad Hiei and Youko beat him down for touching their women!! Please update soon and keep up the great work!!
person Kassie-chan
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay you updated! i can't tell you how many times i checked to see if you updated! i love this story and now since Yusuke and Kuwabara are involved the plot thic! up! update soon!
person Shiro Ryu
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you updated! I love this story! Please update soon! ^_^
person Ymanetta
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man that is a good story. It just keeps you hooked reading chapter after chapter. You have to finish. And keep up the great work.
person Black Thundef´¨ f
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HEY BITCH! TRY UPDATING SOON WHY DON'TCHA? SOME OF US ARE BORED FROM JUST REREADING IT OVER AND OVER AGAIN YOU KNOW!
person Kanzen ne Tsuki
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another yummy Yu Yu treat... this one iss even better than 'Crushed Petals'.
Yummy, Yummy Kurama... couldn't be the fact that he resembles Kenshin could it?
Just keep writing, girl. This is a great story.
Tsuki-san
person Aoi Koneko
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great, i don't remember if i reviewed last chapter, sorry if i didn't. I saaw your fan art, i do much worse, i can't draw anthing but three legged/anatomically correct stick figures. I like the mix of lemon and plot. I pity bakura, well, not really. I found him interupting Youko helarious because of the glare. Good job keep up this lovly fan fiction.
person Senaca
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wooo-hooo! Another well-written chapter. Please continue when you can.
person Nina
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're such a great writer. I just love this story. And once again Kurama gets some play and not just Yoko. I like the twist with Hiei marking Shizuru. I don't think she'll mind all that much. And I'm glad you got Yukina out of there. Can't wait to see how our demons handle that asshole who wants to bed the girls. Sh be be excitingan'an't wait for the next chapter. I also like that your chapters are long. Especially when it take a long time to update. Now I know why. Some authors make you wait forever and then they give you two paragraphs. It gets frustrating for the reader. Well keep up the excellent work. Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person dunken
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!! you updated! i was very happy to see that and i absolutely loved its. in fact, i even put off studying for a test to read it, not that i recommend doing that. i can't wait for the next chapter so update soon, please!!