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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was reallly good! i love all of your keiko kurama stories
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June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An interesting (and well written) fan-fic if I've ever seen one, and I've seen quite a few. The characters are as they are in the show, mostly, and interesting in their own right. I must say, I am impressed
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait till you post the epilogue, so you know this is one of my favourite fan fics. ^___^
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this fic!!!! I stayed up until 5:15 in the morning trying to finish it! I'm just glad that I don't have work tomorrow...or is it today? Anyway Please post that last chappie soon. The suspence is killing me!!!! Oh, I loved the similar ways that my fave demons get rid of intruders! ;) Loved it!
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, where's the epilogue??
this is such a hooooooooooooooot fic
great!
this is such a hooooooooooooooot fic
great!
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hope epilogue is soon in coming 'cause that's probably why this still feels unfinished. Heh. But I still like it!
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was some very interesting and well typed chapters. Please update soon with the last chapter.
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story alot and i am curious to know when you are gonna update it, since i have read this story like 8 times already, and i am eager to know if you are done with it or if you are updating it. Again this story is really good
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVED THIS!
Out of all your fanfics this was the best (mainly because it was finished *hint hint nudge nudge*
I really enjoyed this one. I started reading about midnight and stopped before 2am at the beginning of chapter five because I was going to pass out. However I found myself dreaming of how the fic could be ending, and didn't get much rest. Funny huh? Ha ha.
Also, as i started to read this a friend and I were roleplaying a similar slave theme. Kind of ironic. It gave me a deeper insight for ideas for our roleplaying, and you portrayed the characters really well, even Shizuru, where in most fics with her included I find her OOC. My fave line was the "So just shut up and fuck me already" or whatever, from chapter four...?
I believe that a talented authoress like yourself could write novels, and I would be proud to find something that dramatic as a paperback in the future. I don't find many fanfic authors who can write well, spell well, and keep good grammar (i hate bad spelling and bad grammar) and I am really proud ot say you are one of the best. There are breaks between paragraphs, nice spacing so it isn't hard on the eyes. It was very easy for me (especially in my deluded states of falling asleep and waking up to read) to distinguish who was talking/thinking.
As said above, this is my all-time favourite fic. I think my only other comment is to update the other YYH ones, XD!
I look forward to re-reading everything in this fic and your others ^-^
Out of all your fanfics this was the best (mainly because it was finished *hint hint nudge nudge*
I really enjoyed this one. I started reading about midnight and stopped before 2am at the beginning of chapter five because I was going to pass out. However I found myself dreaming of how the fic could be ending, and didn't get much rest. Funny huh? Ha ha.
Also, as i started to read this a friend and I were roleplaying a similar slave theme. Kind of ironic. It gave me a deeper insight for ideas for our roleplaying, and you portrayed the characters really well, even Shizuru, where in most fics with her included I find her OOC. My fave line was the "So just shut up and fuck me already" or whatever, from chapter four...?
I believe that a talented authoress like yourself could write novels, and I would be proud to find something that dramatic as a paperback in the future. I don't find many fanfic authors who can write well, spell well, and keep good grammar (i hate bad spelling and bad grammar) and I am really proud ot say you are one of the best. There are breaks between paragraphs, nice spacing so it isn't hard on the eyes. It was very easy for me (especially in my deluded states of falling asleep and waking up to read) to distinguish who was talking/thinking.
As said above, this is my all-time favourite fic. I think my only other comment is to update the other YYH ones, XD!
I look forward to re-reading everything in this fic and your others ^-^
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October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*snickers*
poor Kuwabara and Yusuke....
Well not really anyways! Hurry up with the epilouge will you?
PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE?
poor Kuwabara and Yusuke....
Well not really anyways! Hurry up with the epilouge will you?
PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE?