schedule
April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is actually very funny and pretty well written if it weren't for the typos. Just a suggestion, maybe you wanna clear up the typos and re-post it. You might even get more reviews !
schedule
April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Actually, the typos you speak of (at least mostly, I'm sure, since I ran a spellcheck before posting) is caused from uploading it to AFF.net. I happens to most stories, actually.