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^_^ I read this first chappy a few days ago and what can I say, it was really, really, really, really good. *Has a very large vocabulary* Then I read the second (Which I will be reviewing lol). ^___^ I liked this chapter! Very well written, funny, cute, and just all 'round good. And of course, left me wanting to read more, which I did. LOL ^^- All in all ....... I liked it. Probably one of my favorites out of all the fics I've ever read! It had an actual story line (which a lot don't ...... o.o like stuff I write LOL). Even if a lot of plotless stories are really good. LOL (At least I've found them to be) Ah, the way things flow. I like stories that aren't so confusing to read so that they try and trick people into thinking they're good but they aren't only you don't really know bec you you gave up on reading long ago. ^_^ I love fics that are simple and actually enjoyable to read. Just looking at how the words are put together in an inviting way to eye makes me want to read it. ^^ Thanks for that! LOL

Yes, me again. The second chapter I think I liked ever more than the first. Just the way Kurama and Hiei seemed to care and worry about each other. It seemed very realistic and yet ... like them. ^_^ Not to mention something I'll be adding to one of my favorite quotes, " Uncy Baka" ROLMAO HA Hhat\hat's priceless ... heehee. Very good ... LOL. That kid sounds like the cutest thing . . . *.* ... o.O I can't tell who he is more like, Hiei 'r Kurama. He's like both ....................... well I'm done think about that for now. LOL ^_^ Anyway I think he acted just the way he should!

And , I , I think writting more would be great! Maybe show what happens as the little one gets older. Heehee ... o.o Hiei dealing with a troublesome teen. LOL ^_^ Anyway I think it has some good possiblities if you wanted to write more. ^____^ I'd read!

Wow I really liked that story, It was sweet and the thought of Hiei as a father is a really good one. I totally think you should continue the story cause its really good and well written ^-^

hey this is sato! flurfy can't reveiw right now due to a case of temporary amnesia!!
but i think you should continue!! its a great story!! and if flurfy were sane, i mean as sane as he can get he would say so too! so please continue! ^__^ !!!!!

That is such a sweet story!! Please hurry with the next chapter! I like the name you picked for the baby too! Great job! Kee the the good work!!!!!!!!!

that was awsome.continu

I loved it. You should definetly put more chapters up.^__^

-is readine fie fic- -is loving the fic- O.O -fic ends- NUUUU!!!! Though i must admit i liked the way you ended it. Please, another part would be quite nice. I wana know if Marik will be embarissed by his 2 fathers as a teen or if he ends up saying screw school and goes to the Makai. I wanna know what his kitsune form looks like. So, please, i'm being polherehere, give us some more tp READ!!!!!

Your faithful reader,
~Shadow

Hehe. I loved the story, but I wish Marek had gotten the fire power of Hiei as well as the plant control of Kurama. Or will he develope that skill if you continue? Like one day while training he lights his whip on fire, creating a more powerful weapon? Hehe oh the fun.

You caught my attention with your name. It maches my Email! ^_^!
The story sounds really good so far. I think you should continue.
Good luck!