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by shara47379

person techempath1 (not signed in)
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was great!!! Not really what i expected from the title, at least the beginning. It was wonderful. Hiei's cute when he's naive.
person akako
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oo i love this story,i read it before on some site,it's so kawaii and it's a lemon,im a perv so you can give me a hk lemon anyday! *wink* great job on the story
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting...^^

You do have some good ideas concerning yôko...make them more like actual foxes^^. And I just imagined teh look on Kurama's face when Hiei was playing with his tail...mmmm....

And this is the *SECOND* time you have managed to make me blush.
person JesPaiTha
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked it pretty well, even though I'm not too crazy about the original youko form uramurama, it was magnificent! I love it when Hiei had his first time seeing Youko's penis. lol nice.
person katarica
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Pretty cool. You have a good writing style. Wouldn't mind seeing something with a more serious/longer style from you ^_^ (like a multi-chap story)
*sends this one to her furry friends* ^_^
person Katy
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story!! It was very good!! You had some very good ideas!!
person Anya
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ya-ho!!! Liked your story very much, but I think I've alredy read it somewhere else... I'll be waiting for your next one, keep going.
Best wishes! 8)