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for The Meikai War

by saiyanb

person TheBlackRose
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello. Me again. I can't say this enough, I'M SO HAPPY THAT U'RE STILL WRITING FICS! This fic is an all time fav of mine and I can't wait to read what's coming up! Please do update soon. Good Luck with this AMAZING fic. Ja.
person Kurama no Miko2003
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This truly is a wonderful fic; yes, I'm the same person with the same name that reviewed before. I think you should continue this fic no matter what; it's a beautiful piece of work that deserves an end just as beautiful as the fic itself. This is one of the few fics I've read and decided it was worth re-reading; not just parts of it, but ALL of it. So, could you please continue this? This fic is a rare gem amongst the plain stones out there in the realm of fanfiction; one that lacks completion, but is already taking shape as one. I know certain characters will, die, but, like all good movies where the ending is known, I want to know HOW it happened, WHY it happened, and, perhaps most importantly, WHAT led up to it. Continue this, please? I'll cnue nue to leave similar reviews each time I read these 17 chapters until you do . . .

~ Kurama no Miko2003
person Susanna
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HI!
Yours story is one of the most beautiful I've ever read!
I love the idea of reincarnation and love after death!! ^^
I's too romantic!
But your story is also very realistic:
You can deascrive the psyche of each character in a wonderful and very complete way!!
And you write so well that it is like a beautiful romance... past mixed with the present, love with hate, very evocative battles with esplicit lemon scenes (that I love a lot, since they are HieixKurama!!)... You have an extraordinary narrative tecnique!!!!!!!
And you know very well Yu Yu Hakusho, because every bit of your story is deeply connected with this manga, Every thing you've invented is very plausibile!
I'M ESTATIC!!! ^^
So, please, write more!!!!
You can write the last chapters of this Fanfiction with all the time you need!
But, please, Ilikelike to read an end as beautiful as tha rest of this story!! You can do it!! ^^

Sorry if my English is a bit strange, but I'm Italian... I'm very much used to READ this language but I'm not very skilled in writing it...
Thank 4 have read my Review!

CIAO!!!
person Kurama no Miko2003
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is seriously one of the best YYH fics I've EVER read! I love your style; your story has a wondrous sense of flow. The romance is deep and introspective; each part has its own purpose. I truly enjoyed your idea of multiple reincarnations of each character and how it all ties together into a seamless story. Absolutely amazing! I seriously stayed up all night just to read all 17 chapters of your fic. I look forward to reading your future chapters!

~ Kurama no Miko2003
person Anya
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh!!! You're doing a great job!!! Please keep going!!!! Hope you'll update soon!!!! You have a lot of fans already, don't tease us!!! It's nasty!!!
Best wishes! 8D
person Everqueen
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this keeps getting better and better. WOW. I can't wait for you to update this.
person Eri-san
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
it.. it's.. so.. beautifuull..

::sparkles::

::nosebleed::
person Katy
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have read this before and i loved it!! I still do! 1Oh i hope you do finish it!! Add more chapters soon ok!! I just love the writing style nd the story. You did a wonderful job on both. I was so excited when i saw you posted it on here!! Now if you could just post more i'd be in heaven!!
person Everqueen
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG, why didn't i read this before, that was absolutely awesome, I can't wait for the next chapter, you are a gifted writer.