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Love this story so much! keep it up!

Awesome! I love this fanfic so much! damn tripod took your YYH site down and I cried cause i lost this fic! I'm so glad I found it again! Keep up the awesome writing! This fic rocks!

Hi! How are you? I love your stories and hope you continue to work on them. "Meikai War" is my favorite story of yours and hope you will finish it. Sayonara!
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Hello, My name is Mea, and I have to say this fanfic is the most touching, moving, beautiful, fanfic I have ever read. You stoped writing about a year ago. I know you might not look at these reveiws anymore, but you have got to finish this story. I am not the only one. I have been telling people about your site. I have read almost all your fanfics. They are just..I can't even find a word to describe them. I have been all over the web, have read hundreds of fanfics, but none have ever moved me like yours. I laughed and cryed while reading these. I have for other stories to, but yours are truely the best. I am not the only one who feels that way. I know of some others who do. One person even put Forbbiden Love on Media Miner.org. It was the first fic that ever really touched me. Until I found your site it was my all time favorite. The Dreams series was the most origanal I have ever seen. All your works are origanal. They need to be displayed for the world to see. If I have your permission, I will show them to the world. When I have an account I will try to put them up. You are the best fanfic author ever. So please countinue writing, finish this story. People diserve to read it. I will tell people of your site. The world will know of you. If you ever read this reveiw, know that I will always be waiting. Also I am NOT a lesbian. I just love your stories. Thank you for everything, Thank You!
Sincerely Mea ^_^

I was literally crying after reading the story. The reencarnation, the plot, the gorgeous way you portrayed the characters... I was, and still am, stunned. The story itself held everything- angst, love, jelosey, demons and gods, indiffrence- all the emotions anyone has every experenced were present, in the form of a addictive story that held reencarnations of everyone, from incarnations of themselves- no one truly out of character, because, in a way, you invented the characters. I can't really describe the way I felt after reading this story- simular to the way some feel after watching the final bit of an involving movie that left them breathless, reading the story they can most relate with, finished that last chapter of an amazing manga, or just staring at a piece of artwork, a true masterpiece.I don't even know the last time you updated, if you look at reviews- I just want you to know this is the most increidable story I have ever read. I thank you for creatig this little universe inside a fanfic, with the ryuus, a past behind every character... I truly don't know what else to say

I was browsing the YYH section for more fics to read and I came across this one. Let me tell you, at first I was a bit skeptic about reading it because it's different frmo what i usually read. BUt let me tell you, I LOVE THIS FIC. I can't believe there hasnt been an updat for more than a year. Please at least give us an author's note. ='[ I really enjoyed reading this fic. You sensory details are beautiful and your writing style is very enjoyable. Please give us something! ^^;; =]

About time! I was waiting for this fic to be continued...

Hey I love this story, I've been reading it for quite some time now. I also love you other works, i would have to say Brides was my favorite. I hope you finish this story soon and possibly write your other story called Teens. I look forward to your future works!

Let us just say that I'm not all too pleased with the upbrupt ending of new chapters. I know it seems to have been nearly a year since you last updated this fanfic and so it is unlikely that you will do so again, but I can still beg can't I? I dearly wish know what happens nexdmitdmittedly more in the current timeline rather than the flashback) As for constructive criticism, you really need to proof read your chapters. There are many, many mistakes throughout the chapters that do tend to wear the reader down and decrease their enjoyment of the story. At least, it is so in my case. Also, don't bother being so detailed with your descriptions of the flashbacks - mainly I am refering to the meetings and planning that takes place. For example, there is no need for the reader to hear thrice of the elemental shield plan or to know the exact reactions of each stone bearer. Another couple of things I noticed, you described Sunoo as having feathers, which is the first time that a ryu is mentioned to have anything other than scales. This could just be additional detail on your part or a discrepancy. And in the final scene of chapter 17 - where Inari and Suoh made love - how would Inari have avoided touching the elemental stone when he collapsed? He can't touch the stone because he is not of the fire element. That said, please consider my words, but, more importantly, please continue with this story!

This is sooooo good so far! I'd alter the summary you have so that more people will read it. Try adding information about the events occuring between Kurama and Hiei - that would definitely get you some more hits. I've noticed that you seem to like Kuwabara and not Urameshi - this is all based on how intelligent you are portraying them. Usually Kuwabara is the dunce and Yusuke is fairly intelligent, but that seems to be reversed here. I just wanted to say that before I continued. Keep on Truckin'.