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for The Urameshi Girls

by JesseVargas

person hazeleyegurl28
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! It is a really good start just keep going I wanna know what ends up happening to the girls!!:) Update soon?! Thankz a bunch:)
person hazeleyegurl28
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey lovin the story keep updating i really want to know what happens next. thanks alot
person hazeleyegurl28
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I commend you on the latest update. Nice Cliffy please update this soon i can't wait till next ciao!!!!:)
person Dark delta
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Long time but yay you updated, this was a sweet and funny chap I mean all the fainting you should have some girls have bloody nose case instead of fainting that would have been hilarious sucks they all feel that way well if they do escape to the makia have Hiei save that would be cool Hiei and Kurama that's my pair no Yukina, Kuwabara I don't think I can imagine a lemon scene Yukina is so innocent unlike her brother ok enough please updated don't take too long ja ne
person KuwaLove
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read all of the chapters and I loved it! It is soooo good! I can't wait to read more! I would love to see a lemon between Sakuya/Bryan (I hope I spelled their names right, sorry if I didn't) and Kuwabara/Yukina (I think they would be interesting to see, since there isn't too many Kuwabara/Yukina lemons around) Thanks for letting the reader choose and I can't wait! Update soon please!
person hazeleyegurl28
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! I really love this story if you could update soon that would be great thanks alot:)<3 ya
person Tita
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi! congrats for your fic, I love it!! please, please continue I can bearly wao reo read another charter soon! ^_^ chao..
person Senaca
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it. 2 good lemons, and a well-written plot.
person Dark Delta
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is going great this really makes up for the long time of updating please keep it up its good do hurry i hate suspenses.
person Youka_Kitsuna
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Continue this awesome fic,plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!