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for Blind Pain

by katarica

person JesPaiTha
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was soooooo sweet! great lemon, I love you for it! *swoons* It was funny que question Hiei asked Kurama at the end though! Mmmmmuuuummmm good job
person Gabbi
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL! the ending was priceless!
person Katy
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh baby yeah!! THats what i am talking about!! I was so looking forward to this chapter it was sooooo good!!! Man i can't wait to read more fics from you!!
person Anya
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi!!! Thanx for writing this story!!! It was just wonderful!!! And the lemon part was very very very interesting, espesially the ending. ^.^ (didn't know that smb can watch "a dog porn"/ hi-hi-hi)
If not tired, can you write smth else or maybe a sequel??? Pleaseeeee!!!! (see my big puppy-eyes with long lashes???)
Best wishes!!! 8D
person JesPaiTha
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Iss Iss I can wait. I like you! Please hurry!
person JesPaiTha
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I guess I can wait. I like you! Please hurry~!
person Yue
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooops! *blush* Let me ellaborate, uke-submissive (bottom in the relationship), seme-dominant (agressor/top in the relationship). Hehe, I'm sorry... I guess I will find out as I read though, ne? Um, i havn't read the next chappie after Pain and Porn because I saw that you were confused so I decided I would tell you first. Sorry! Um, I'll go read now and the answer is probably awaiting me in the next few chappies! *shrug* I guess I will have to find out, ne?*smirk* ok! *glomp* chu! -Yue
person Yue
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Reda the beginning of chappie eight and thankies! *glomp* that does explain a lot! *blush* I'm such a child...*giggle, smile* ok! Thankie for answering my questions!! *glomp* *heart, heart* chu~ -Yue
person Yue
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chappie eight was sooo tong!!ng!!! *wipes tears* The beauty of it all has brought tears to my eyes!!!! *glomp* Yay!!!! I'll go read what you recommended latrer after I finish reading this one (I hope you post chappie ten soon) and you are a great writer! Never doubt that for a second!! Now *is standing on the front of a small row boat with the cast of Yu Yu Hakusho, except for Hiei and Kurama, rowing with the oars. I am wearing a hat and am pointing towards the next page, Botan is holding up a 'Yaoi' flag and Keiko is playing the flute* Onward! *glomp...again* chu~ -Yue
person JesPaiTha
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww that's soooo good. Sorry I haven't reviewed other chapters, you've been updating soast.ast. (and I've been grounded u.u;) Your new story is going to be a sadder ending? Awwww will it be a little happy? ^-^;; I'll read it no matter what though, this story is so good, so that one should be too. Hiei and Kurama's first kiss was so cute! That was fantastic!, my body shivered and then melted in my shoes. ^_~ I think my temperature must be around 105 degrees cause it was so good. *hugs you* You neeeeeeed to begin that lemon! I'm so excited to read it. I'll be watching for it!