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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Os that really the end? Please don't let it be, I like this story a lot and I really think that you can create really great chapters if you continue. So is is too much for a fan to ask fro another chapter? pretty please with a Kurama on top? ^_^
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There were a few grammatical errors, but nothing big. Overall I absolutely loved this story. It was adorable. Please write a sequel!
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was awsome,love your work PLEASE PLEASE PLEASSSSSSSSE! CONTINUE SOON!!!!!!!!.
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was way awsome.Loved your work PLEASSSSSSSSSSE! continue with a chapter 2 or even a sequal ^_^.
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October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was so great. I liked the way you matched their personalities perfectly and made Hiei on top. ^-^;;; There is WAY too much stories with Kurama on top and I preferably like Hiei the dominant. I love this story, please make more!
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ack! You have a GREAT story going there! You have to do more. This is a great scenario. You have good story talents. From a fellow author.........GOOD JOB!!! Peace out.
-Tori
-Tori
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September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::swoons::
That was beautiful...
That was beautiful...
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September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey--that was great! The descriptions were good, and the story was believable, and not rushed. ^_^ keep writing.
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September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story. would love to see it continued.
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September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved it soooo much!!!! Do you have anything else???? Or how about 'chapter 2'??? PLEASE!!!! Don't make me beg!!! 8)